# advertisement. whadda ya think?
**URL:** https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532
**Category:** PittSpeed Off Topic
**Created:** [August 26, 2006, 11:08pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532 "2006-08-26T23:08:28Z")
**Posts on this page:** 20
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### Author:  [@Darkstar](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Darkstar)
#### Post date: [August 26, 2006, 11:08pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/1 "2006-08-26T23:08:28Z")
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### Author:  [@dgramc](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/dgramc)
#### Post date: [August 26, 2006, 11:19pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/2 "2006-08-26T23:19:33Z")
looks good, where are you posting it?
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### Author:  [@SloWhite\_Z](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/SloWhite_Z)
#### Post date: [August 26, 2006, 11:38pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/3 "2006-08-26T23:38:48Z")
are you starting your own business or is this part of the whole hotel thing
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### Author:  [@mp3ray](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/mp3ray)
#### Post date: [August 26, 2006, 11:43pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/4 "2006-08-26T23:43:42Z")
dude, you should start a pool cleaning service hosted by women in bikinis and a seperate one by young hot males - the business would just FLOW in!
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### Author:  [@Darkstar](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Darkstar)
#### Post date: [August 26, 2006, 11:46pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/5 "2006-08-26T23:46:31Z")
> [@The irony is strong...](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/the-irony-is-strong/23910/18):
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> looks good, where are you posting it?
local newspapers.
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### Author:  [@Darkstar](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Darkstar)
#### Post date: [August 26, 2006, 11:46pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/6 "2006-08-26T23:46:58Z")
> [@omghi2u](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/omghi2u/23927/12):
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> are you starting your own business or is this part of the whole hotel thing
already started the business. last november.
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### Author:  [@Darkstar](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Darkstar)
#### Post date: [August 26, 2006, 11:47pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/7 "2006-08-26T23:47:56Z")
> [@You thought Jailbait was cool?](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/you-thought-jailbait-was-cool/23932/6):
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> dude, you should start a pool cleaning service hosted by women in bikinis and a seperate one by young hot males - the business would just FLOW in!
ok. looking for a job? :naughty:
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### Author:  [@mp3ray](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/mp3ray)
#### Post date: [August 27, 2006, 12:02am UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/8 "2006-08-27T00:02:49Z")
part time on the weekends? got a pool i could get started in? 😉
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### Author:  [@Darkstar](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Darkstar)
#### Post date: [August 27, 2006, 12:31am UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/9 "2006-08-27T00:31:12Z")
> [@CATURDAY](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/caturday/17848/111):
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> got a pool i could get started in? 😉
no, but I have a shovel and a back yard.
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### Author:  [@mp3ray](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/mp3ray)
#### Post date: [August 27, 2006, 8:29am UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/10 "2006-08-27T08:29:46Z")
> [@Tiger Japanese Auto Parts (out of Toronto)](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/tiger-japanese-auto-parts-out-of-toronto/23887/33):
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> no, but I have a shovel and a back yard.
🤣 🤣
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### Author:  [@bgblockelcamino](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/bgblockelcamino)
#### Post date: [August 27, 2006, 8:51am UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/11 "2006-08-27T08:51:49Z")
looks good mike
clean simple and effective
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### Author:  [@Jordons\_Pontiac](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Jordons_Pontiac)
#### Post date: [August 27, 2006, 8:56am UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/12 "2006-08-27T08:56:29Z")
Looks good.
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### Author:  [@slowcamaro](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/slowcamaro)
#### Post date: [August 27, 2006, 9:20am UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/13 "2006-08-27T09:20:37Z")
I like it
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### Author:  [@Bravada\_442](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Bravada_442)
#### Post date: [August 27, 2006, 10:38am UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/14 "2006-08-27T10:38:53Z")
Needs a bigger phone number. Print quality in newspapers is always shittier than what you’re going to design in Adobe/Quark/Print Shop.
Typically, they are going to be aware that you are accepting new clients for the season. You’re stating the obvious. I would think it would be better to move phone number to a central location in the ad and then put the statement about your clients lower on the ad. In an ad where you aren’t running specials or describing your quality/abilities, you’re phone number should be the central idea.
Just a couple ideas. Hope you don’t take me as being an ass, b/c I’m not trying to be. Just trying to help.
edit - Also, try and maybe come up with a catch line or a motto for the company. Something that will allow prospective clients to remember you and something that will give you a little differentiation from the other pool management companies.
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### Author:  [@Pewter](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Pewter)
#### Post date: [August 27, 2006, 10:45am UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/15 "2006-08-27T10:45:37Z")
> [@UB: Quiet library on south?](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/ub-quiet-library-on-south/23777/14):
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> Needs a bigger phone number. Print quality in newspapers is always shittier than what you’re going to design in Adobe/Quark/Print Shop.
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> Typically, they are going to be aware that you are accepting new clients for the season. You’re stating the obvious. I would think it would be better to move phone number to a central location in the ad and then put the statement about your clients lower on the ad. In an ad where you aren’t running specials or describing your quality/abilities, you’re phone number should be the central idea.
>
> Just a couple ideas. Hope you don’t take me as being an ass, b/c I’m not trying to be. Just trying to help.
>
> edit - Also, try and maybe come up with a catch line or a motto for the company. Something that will allow prospective clients to remember you and something that will give you a little differentiation from the other pool management companies.
i agree,but aint u been cleaning poles since u were 7?
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### Author:  [@Bravada\_442](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Bravada_442)
#### Post date: [August 27, 2006, 12:07pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/16 "2006-08-27T12:07:50Z")
> [@pewterss"](#):
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> i agree,but aint u been cleaning poles since u were 7?
no no no, its swallow swords. not clean poles :naughty:
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### Author:  [@1320](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/1320)
#### Post date: [August 27, 2006, 2:22pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/17 "2006-08-27T14:22:38Z")
Looks good Mikey… Although I would probably also mention something about how good your mothers semen removal tactics are. And maybe even how much she likes to be my human toilet paper.
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### Author:  [@rookee](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/rookee)
#### Post date: [August 27, 2006, 2:33pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/18 "2006-08-27T14:33:42Z")
> [@Windshields....](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/windshields/23900/10):
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> I like it
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### Author:  [@Darkstar](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Darkstar)
#### Post date: [August 27, 2006, 9:02pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/19 "2006-08-27T21:02:32Z")
> [@2/2 Frizzy's beer wasted omg](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/2-2-frizzys-beer-wasted-omg/23770/32):
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> Looks good Mikey… Although I would probably also mention something about how good your mothers semen removal tactics are. And maybe even how much she likes to be my human toilet paper.
she is good. I mean, no woman besides her has ever been able to get any semen out of you. Thats talent right there.
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### Author:  [@Darkstar](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Darkstar)
#### Post date: [August 27, 2006, 9:04pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/advertisement-whadda-ya-think/184532/20 "2006-08-27T21:04:06Z")
> [@UB: Quiet library on south?](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/ub-quiet-library-on-south/23777/14):
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> Needs a bigger phone number. Print quality in newspapers is always shittier than what you’re going to design in Adobe/Quark/Print Shop.
>
> Typically, they are going to be aware that you are accepting new clients for the season. You’re stating the obvious. I would think it would be better to move phone number to a central location in the ad and then put the statement about your clients lower on the ad. In an ad where you aren’t running specials or describing your quality/abilities, you’re phone number should be the central idea.
>
> Just a couple ideas. Hope you don’t take me as being an ass, b/c I’m not trying to be. Just trying to help.
>
> edit - Also, try and maybe come up with a catch line or a motto for the company. Something that will allow prospective clients to remember you and something that will give you a little differentiation from the other pool management companies.
eh… every company down here has some cheesy lame as fuck catch phrase. I refuse to engage in such faggotry. The idea about the phone number isnt bad though.
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