# Empire Fitment website debut. **URL:** \ **Category:** Shift518 Automotive\ **Created:** [May 3, 2013, 11:52pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946 "2013-05-03T23:52:19Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 13
**Author:** ![AVB](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/avb/32/6751_2.png) [@AVB](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/AVB)\ **Post date:** [May 23, 2013, 2:14pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/241 "2013-05-23T14:14:10Z")
Honestly there are so many fucking run on sentences in your write ups man. I suggest you have someone proof read for you if you get alot of viewers on the web page ---
**Author:** ![slwrthnu](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/slwrthnu/32/6296_2.png) [@slwrthnu](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/slwrthnu)\ **Post date:** [May 23, 2013, 2:29pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/242 "2013-05-23T14:29:55Z")
> [@kingsario vs "I got everything" MS3](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/kingsario-vs-i-got-everything-ms3/52686/30): > > Honestly there are so many fucking run on sentences in your write ups man. I suggest you have someone proof read for you if you get alot of viewers on the web page or find someone that has taken some college level english classes recently. ---
**Author:** ![Corey\_Maurer](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/258eb7/32.png) [@Corey\_Maurer](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Corey_Maurer)\ **Post date:** [May 23, 2013, 2:43pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/243 "2013-05-23T14:43:16Z")
Mind pointing them out Frank? ---
**Author:** ![Corey\_Maurer](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/258eb7/32.png) [@Corey\_Maurer](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Corey_Maurer)\ **Post date:** [May 23, 2013, 2:45pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/244 "2013-05-23T14:45:04Z")
In the Subaru one anyhow, I noticed it in the older ones ---
**Author:** ![AVB](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/avb/32/6751_2.png) [@AVB](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/AVB)\ **Post date:** [May 23, 2013, 3:09pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/245 "2013-05-23T15:09:34Z")
I’m not even trying to be a troll man I’m just saying if the page has alot of views and what not and you don’t have the articles spot on with no errors some people will become uninterested. See that was a run-on sentence ---
**Author:** ![AVB](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/avb/32/6751_2.png) [@AVB](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/AVB)\ **Post date:** [May 23, 2013, 3:10pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/246 "2013-05-23T15:10:53Z")
> [@Tape backup solutions...](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/tape-backup-solutions/52814/3): > > or find someone that has taken some college level english classes recently. Not sure if trying to troll me but I did just take ENG 102 last semester lol ---
**Author:** ![AVB](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/avb/32/6751_2.png) [@AVB](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/AVB)\ **Post date:** [May 23, 2013, 3:14pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/247 "2013-05-23T15:14:01Z")
Some places you used and and didnt use commas where they needed to be. ---
**Author:** ![slwrthnu](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/slwrthnu/32/6296_2.png) [@slwrthnu](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/slwrthnu)\ **Post date:** [May 23, 2013, 3:29pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/248 "2013-05-23T15:29:00Z")
> [@Famous stars and straps](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/famous-stars-and-straps/52818/26): > > Not sure if trying to troll me but I did just take ENG 102 last semester lol no not trying to troll you at all, agreeing with you. unfortunately most car blogs seem like they are written by people that don’t care what is written down. ---
**Author:** ![johnnyk](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/johnnyk/32/6480_2.png) [@johnnyk](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/johnnyk)\ **Post date:** [May 23, 2013, 3:31pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/249 "2013-05-23T15:31:00Z")
website sucks, eat shit bum ---
**Author:** ![blkwgn](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/7feea3/32.png) [@blkwgn](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/blkwgn)\ **Post date:** [May 23, 2013, 4:37pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/250 "2013-05-23T16:37:09Z")
I’m with AVB, not being mean or trolling or anything, the one thing I did notice: “If **_your_** a native of the Saratoga area chances are you have…” ---
**Author:** ![Corey\_Maurer](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/258eb7/32.png) [@Corey\_Maurer](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Corey_Maurer)\ **Post date:** [May 23, 2013, 4:40pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/251 "2013-05-23T16:40:06Z")
Good call, we’ll have to take more time to comb through things ---
**Author:** ![slwrthnu](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/slwrthnu/32/6296_2.png) [@slwrthnu](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/slwrthnu)\ **Post date:** [May 23, 2013, 4:44pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/252 "2013-05-23T16:44:52Z")
> [@Wow, I'm bored... trolling the gas saving forum](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/wow-im-bored-trolling-the-gas-saving-forum/52809/55): > > Good call, we’ll have to take more time to comb through things if you are writing them up in word, don’t expect it to catch every mistake, actually re-read them. going from your fb you write them a couple days before they make it to the site, go back a day later and read it out lout, make sure it makes sense then. have one of the other people that helps out with the site read it next. there can never be too many eyes on something … coming from the kid who’s personal essay for law schools was barely edited first draft, i can give advice, doesn’t mean i take my own lol. ---
**Author:** ![Corey\_Maurer](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/258eb7/32.png) [@Corey\_Maurer](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Corey_Maurer)\ **Post date:** [May 23, 2013, 5:26pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/253 "2013-05-23T17:26:18Z")
My problem in high school and college was always proof reading. Not so much that I don’t see the mistakes but rather I don’t want to admit I made them LMAO. I think taking a day between writing and re-reading might actually help a lot, I’ll try that with this upcoming feature. ---
**Author:** ![slwrthnu](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/slwrthnu/32/6296_2.png) [@slwrthnu](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/slwrthnu)\ **Post date:** [May 23, 2013, 5:51pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/254 "2013-05-23T17:51:55Z")
its the best thing you can do when proof reading. obv read it right after youre done but then again a day later. ---
**Author:** ![daknut93](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/daknut93/32/6743_2.png) [@daknut93](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/daknut93)\ **Post date:** [May 23, 2013, 6:25pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/255 "2013-05-23T18:25:15Z")
I think you need more about the car. It seems the featurs are more about the persons character than the car. Personaly idc about them as a person i care about the car ---
**Author:** ![Corey\_Maurer](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/258eb7/32.png) [@Corey\_Maurer](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Corey_Maurer)\ **Post date:** [May 31, 2013, 8:29pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/256 "2013-05-31T20:29:45Z")
Newest feature is up ---
**Author:** ![slwrthnu](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/slwrthnu/32/6296_2.png) [@slwrthnu](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/slwrthnu)\ **Post date:** [May 31, 2013, 9:35pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/257 "2013-05-31T21:35:49Z")
the first sentence is so blatantly ignorant and closed minded american that i stopped reading right then and there. car looks nice though. ---
**Author:** ![Yetti\_VR](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/yetti_vr/32/6357_2.png) [@Yetti\_VR](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Yetti_VR)\ **Post date:** [May 31, 2013, 9:50pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/258 "2013-05-31T21:50:20Z")
“Automotive restoration has long been reserved mostly for the domestic crowd.”… I know Elliott already said it but really? Really? ---
**Author:** ![slwrthnu](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/slwrthnu/32/6296_2.png) [@slwrthnu](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/slwrthnu)\ **Post date:** [June 1, 2013, 6:55am UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/259 "2013-06-01T06:55:35Z")
if this was 1995 and this was the first car blog ever it would be acceptable, but even in america restoring old japanese rides has been huge for at least the last 10 years, and i’m talking more then just 240zs, as owners have been restoring them since they bought them new since thats how quickly old datsun’s rusted. ---
**Author:** ![Yetti\_VR](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/yetti_vr/32/6357_2.png) [@Yetti\_VR](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Yetti_VR)\ **Post date:** [June 1, 2013, 7:01am UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946/260 "2013-06-01T07:01:18Z")
or the massive amount of old Porsche’s that get restored… Or possibly Ferrari’s or bmw’s so many that aren’t domestic [Previous page](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946.md?page=12) [Next page](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/empire-fitment-website-debut/266946.md?page=14)