# Grammar police... where are you?

**URL:** <https://forums.speedlife.net/t/grammar-police-where-are-you/35189>\
**Category:** NYSpeed Off Topic\
**Created:** [September 11, 2007, 11:22am UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/grammar-police-where-are-you/35189 "2007-09-11T11:22:20Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 8\
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**Author:** ![JayS](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/jays/32/15375_2.png) [@JayS](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/JayS)\
**Post date:** [September 11, 2007, 11:22am UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/grammar-police-where-are-you/35189/1 "2007-09-11T11:22:20Z")

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If you’re going to yell at the casual poster here, hopefully you’re emailing wkbw and holding them accountable as well.

[http://www.wkbw.com/news/local/9709442.html](http://www.wkbw.com/news/local/9709442.html)

> Buffalo Police Officer David Garcia was injured in a hit and run accident while responding to a call on South Park Avenue in Buffalo on June 30th. He was on duty at the time. **He died 28 days later in a funeral without full police death benefits.** His partner told 7 News that he believes his partner died in the line of duty, **but that his in dispute**. Buffalo Police tell 7 News they are looking into what happened.

I guess it’s convenient to die in a funeral. At least they don’t have far to move you.

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**Author:** ![Motocrossx23](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/motocrossx23/32/5120_2.png) [@Motocrossx23](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Motocrossx23)\
**Post date:** [September 11, 2007, 11:34am UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/grammar-police-where-are-you/35189/2 "2007-09-11T11:34:16Z")

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:funny:hahahaha

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**Author:** ![fairgentleman\_Z](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/fairgentleman_z/32/7263_2.png) [@fairgentleman\_Z](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/fairgentleman_Z)\
**Post date:** [September 11, 2007, 11:36am UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/grammar-police-where-are-you/35189/3 "2007-09-11T11:36:28Z")

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David Garcia WAS the grammar police, duh.

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**Author:** ![Fry](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/fry/32/7284_2.png) [@Fry](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Fry)\
**Post date:** [September 11, 2007, 12:16pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/grammar-police-where-are-you/35189/4 "2007-09-11T12:16:03Z")

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I’m pretty sure you missed one, straight out of the SAT’s or GMAT’s or something:

> His partner told 7 News that he believes his partner died in the line of duty,

While that’s a bit of a shitfuck, I’m pretty sure that you can’t use the same pronoun (he/his) for 2 different people in the same sentence. What that’s saying is:

> Garcia’s partner told 7 News that Garcia believes Garcia’s partner died in the line of duty,

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**Author:** ![JayS](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/jays/32/15375_2.png) [@JayS](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/JayS)\
**Post date:** [September 11, 2007, 12:20pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/grammar-police-where-are-you/35189/5 "2007-09-11T12:20:13Z")

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^ Good point. I think my brain just has a failsafe. After so many grammar mistakes or 9/11 conspiracy posts it just auto-ignores.

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**Author:** ![Blue\_Eyed\_Devil](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/blue_eyed_devil/32/7292_2.png) [@Blue\_Eyed\_Devil](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Blue_Eyed_Devil)\
**Post date:** [September 11, 2007, 12:37pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/grammar-police-where-are-you/35189/6 "2007-09-11T12:37:17Z")

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Wait a minute, WTF?  
Was he working a funeral(traffic, etc) when he died?  
What is in dispute?  
That whole article is f’ed up!

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**Author:** ![Fry](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/fry/32/7284_2.png) [@Fry](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Fry)\
**Post date:** [September 11, 2007, 12:40pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/grammar-police-where-are-you/35189/7 "2007-09-11T12:40:00Z")

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I think it’s saying he died 28 days later, and had a funeral without full police benefits. They’re disputing whether or not he died in the line of duty. I think they let an engineer write the article.

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**Author:** ![JayS](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/jays/32/15375_2.png) [@JayS](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/JayS)\
**Post date:** [September 11, 2007, 12:56pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/grammar-police-where-are-you/35189/8 "2007-09-11T12:56:54Z")

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[quote=“AWDrifter,post:6,topic:35189"”]

That whole article is f’ed up!

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That was the point of my post. 😛
