# lot tonight wed march 25th

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**Created:** [March 25, 2009, 3:20pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/lot-tonight-wed-march-25th/243079 "2009-03-25T15:20:15Z")\
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**Author:** ![Alpine](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/4da419/32.png) [@Alpine](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Alpine)\
**Post date:** [March 25, 2009, 4:48pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/lot-tonight-wed-march-25th/243079/10 "2009-03-25T16:48:45Z")

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> [@Callout DRDos](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/callout-drdos/16139/19):
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> When I saw Pete (f’n skanks) today at Gearhead he jokingly asked me if I was going tonight. Now you guys really are going there.
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> Ive gotta be at work at 4:45 am so I wont be out.

Great story Paul. :lol

Serious though. Strong, emotional beginning leading up to the unexpected “I won’t be showing tonight” at the end. I really liked it. It had the reader into thinking you would be at the lot, and then the sudden change away from the reader’s initial thought.

Brilliant!

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