# NSeX shoot **URL:** \ **Category:** Shift518 Automotive\ **Created:** [October 14, 2009, 3:23pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/nsex-shoot/247582 "2009-10-14T15:23:44Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 1\ **Showing post:** 26
**Author:** ![CFD\_Productions](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/cfd_productions/32/6519_2.png) [@CFD\_Productions](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/CFD_Productions)\ **Post date:** [October 14, 2009, 5:26pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/nsex-shoot/247582/26 "2009-10-14T17:26:59Z")
> [@AMD R600 XTX](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/amd-r600-xtx/24450/6): > > Alright, you said you wanted critique; again, I’m not being a dick, just sharing my constructive criticism: > > 1: Not feeling the angle the car is on or the pole in the background. I would like to see more of the cars wheels at an angle I dont have to tilt my head at. I like the low camera angle and little reflections on the black paint. > > 2: Pesky pole in the background again, car seems like it would benefit more from the angle of the sun if it was rotated about 45\* more so the wheels and side of the car would be lit by the sun. > > 3: I like the graffiti wall a lot, but I am wondering what the car would look like against the wall and the shot taken as a side profile shot. > > 4: My favorite of the set. However, the drop in sky is a little too dark compared to the light on the buildings, maybe darken the background more? > > 5: Do you have the same image with the RAYS cap not cropped and the “Gram Lights” in focus? Or if you were trying to keep the RAYS in focus, not such a tight crop on the center cap? > > 6: I cant really give you too much crap about this one being that I did a similar angle with Ryans Supra, but if the NSX was moved 2 more feet to the right and the wheel turned to the left with the Nissan still in the background I think it would add more to the shot. Again, I like the low angle and good job of controlling the reflections. > > 7: Would be seKs if you edited out the chase cars shadow. > > 8: I’d like to see this one with the two cars behind it following more closely, as if it was taken during a race or street race. > > 9: No complaints here, showcases the wheels nicely. > > 10: Building should be a little darker with this drop in sunset. The warm golden tones on the cars quarter panels should be edited to tie the sky in as well. > > 11: Excellent bokeh, shows the wheels colored lip but I am distracted by the Gram Lights logo. geezus i wish you would do this with every shoot i do … would help me out a TON!!! i think you are correct with just about every think you said … alot of the pics i think are just preference … such as the Gram lights logo in number 11 … i have a shot without it but i dont like it as much … and great idea with getting rid of that danm pole … more ideas for next time … and THANKS again --- _[View the full topic](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/nsex-shoot/247582)._