# still in the works...tell me what you think.

**URL:** <https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241>\
**Category:** NYSpeed Off Topic\
**Created:** [January 23, 2006, 10:54pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241 "2006-01-23T22:54:55Z")\
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**Author:** ![JEG](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/jeg/32/7246_2.png) [@JEG](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/JEG)\
**Post date:** [January 23, 2006, 10:54pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/1 "2006-01-23T22:54:55Z")

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Song im writing. Still in the works but wachya think?

**_Vengance_**

All your life you’ve taken shit  
They’ve stoke the fire, now it’s been lit  
So kill’em all and watch’em burn  
They’ve fucked with you, now it’s their turn

Eye for and eye, the only way  
It doesn’t matter what they say  
Let’em scream and watch’em cry  
They fucked with you and so must die

Relentless is their ridicule  
It matters not, just adds more fuel  
The only word you now live by  
Vengance is now your battle cry

Your face, the one they’ll learn to dread  
You wont be done until they’ve bled  
Blood for Blood, run red and strong  
The time is now, they dont have long

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**Author:** ![Choda](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/choda/32/7347_2.png) [@Choda](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Choda)\
**Post date:** [January 23, 2006, 11:21pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/2 "2006-01-23T23:21:19Z")

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:gay2:

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**Author:** ![ly555is](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/l/3bc359/32.png) [@ly555is](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/ly555is)\
**Post date:** [January 23, 2006, 11:41pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/3 "2006-01-23T23:41:17Z")

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\*vengeance

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**Author:** ![Jon](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/j/3bc359/32.png) [@Jon](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Jon)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 4:27am UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/4 "2006-01-24T04:27:14Z")

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It needs alot of work.

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**Author:** ![JEG](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/jeg/32/7246_2.png) [@JEG](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/JEG)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 12:26pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/5 "2006-01-24T12:26:33Z")

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lol…well thanx for the imput…took me a whole 10 min to write it durring commercials waching south park last night.

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**Author:** ![Dr.Stevil](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/da6949/32.png) [@Dr.Stevil](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Dr.Stevil)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 12:51pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/6 "2006-01-24T12:51:50Z")

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I can dig it :tup:

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**Author:** ![Lucky\_Cheater](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/l/eb9ed0/32.png) [@Lucky\_Cheater](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Lucky_Cheater)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 12:55pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/7 "2006-01-24T12:55:52Z")

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please hamma…dont hurt em…

nah…I guess if thats your type of music than more power to ya

-Cheater-

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**Author:** ![walter](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/walter/32/7202_2.png) [@walter](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/walter)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 12:56pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/8 "2006-01-24T12:56:15Z")

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Really… reallly… horrible

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**Author:** ![MonteCarloChick](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/ee59a6/32.png) [@MonteCarloChick](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/MonteCarloChick)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 12:57pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/9 "2006-01-24T12:57:39Z")

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Awesome start :tup:

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**Author:** ![Jam](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/jam/32/7235_2.png) [@Jam](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Jam)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 1:01pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/10 "2006-01-24T13:01:13Z")

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wow thats bad.

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**Author:** ![Fetter](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/f/c2a13f/32.png) [@Fetter](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Fetter)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 1:02pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/11 "2006-01-24T13:02:15Z")

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:shrug:

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**Author:** ![Blue\_Eyed\_Devil](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/blue_eyed_devil/32/7292_2.png) [@Blue\_Eyed\_Devil](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Blue_Eyed_Devil)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 1:07pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/12 "2006-01-24T13:07:14Z")

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Someone needs a hug.

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**Author:** ![Tkklemann](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/tkklemann/32/7298_2.png) [@Tkklemann](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Tkklemann)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 1:10pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/13 "2006-01-24T13:10:30Z")

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> [@AWDrifter](#):
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> Someone needs a hug.

A reach-around might be a little more suitable…

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**Author:** ![articzap](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/articzap/32/7361_2.png) [@articzap](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/articzap)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 1:55pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/14 "2006-01-24T13:55:35Z")

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is this emo?

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**Author:** ![Choda](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/choda/32/7347_2.png) [@Choda](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Choda)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 2:26pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/15 "2006-01-24T14:26:18Z")

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im tryin to picture josh screaming this itno his hand/mic. hahahah pwn

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**Author:** ![STEALTTH](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/stealtth/32/7582_2.png) [@STEALTTH](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/STEALTTH)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 2:36pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/16 "2006-01-24T14:36:50Z")

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not feelin it

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**Author:** ![JEG](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/jeg/32/7246_2.png) [@JEG](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/JEG)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 2:39pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/17 "2006-01-24T14:39:29Z")

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> [@Choda](#):
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> im tryin to picture josh screaming this itno his hand/mic. hahahah pwn

lol…im the drummer not the singer.

ok think Lamb of God when you read it…might make more sence.

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**Author:** ![nitroinsane](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/n/d26b3c/32.png) [@nitroinsane](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/nitroinsane)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 2:48pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/18 "2006-01-24T14:48:48Z")

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> [@AWDrifter](#):
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> Someone needs a hug.

ahahahhaa

kill die die burn bitch. i can write to sweet

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**Author:** ![Jack](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/jack/32/7613_2.png) [@Jack](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Jack)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 4:38pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/19 "2006-01-24T16:38:06Z")

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you need longer lyrics… it is going to sound like an awful poem if you try to make a song out of it.

“They’ve stoke the fire, now it’s been lit” - stoked the fire… and also when yo stoke a fire it is already lit… stoking will just introduce more air to the fire, making it hotter

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**Author:** ![Janny](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex034/user_avatar/forums.speedlife.net/janny/32/7594_2.png) [@Janny](https://forums.speedlife.net/u/Janny)\
**Post date:** [January 24, 2006, 4:41pm UTC](https://forums.speedlife.net/t/still-in-the-works-tell-me-what-you-think/7241/20 "2006-01-24T16:41:38Z")

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> [@JEG](#):
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> lol…well thanx for the imput…took me a whole 10 min to write it during commercials watching south park last night.

we all know it took you 5 years.

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