Mr.Brudzienski,
I enjoyed reading your titillating story. From the mention of ‘something’ moving in the pool, I could only wonder what it could be, and the rest of the story was more than able to pique my interest until it was eventually unveiled that the objects were ducks.
Also, I’ve noticed a recent thread that you made, asking fellow forum members for suggestions on a career change. I wholeheartedly suggest that you consider a career in writing-your skills have been exhibited in this very thread.
With warm regards,
TurboTravis