First time "studio" portraits

Got some umbrella stands for my flashes, bought a big white sheet and threw my bed up against the wall. There are some things that could have been done better or just fixed post processing, but im trying to get better at shooting and not just fixing all my fuck ups or could haves after the fact, the lighting isnt completely even… but not to bad for my first go IMO

I’m aware you can see the wrinkles in the sheet, these are not edited aside from cropping.

Subject is my wife as usual, while these are not as untasteful as the last ones I posted here, please keep it classy

http://mfolmsbee.smugmug.com/Other/Shoot-with-Shannon/i-FLCt6NV/1/XL/shoot-038-XL.jpg

http://mfolmsbee.smugmug.com/Other/Shoot-with-Shannon/i-VcvgCJX/1/XL/shoot-033-Edit-XL.jpg

http://mfolmsbee.smugmug.com/Other/Shoot-with-Shannon/i-4VtMpXN/1/XL/shoot-076-Edit-XL.jpg

http://mfolmsbee.smugmug.com/Other/Shoot-with-Shannon/i-rbpKx2j/1/XL/shoot-077-XL.jpg

http://mfolmsbee.smugmug.com/Other/Shoot-with-Shannon/i-73DPgWQ/1/XL/shoot-094-XL.jpg

and this is where I keep her:

http://mfolmsbee.smugmug.com/Other/Shoot-with-Shannon/i-SCCFHCn/0/XL/shoot-021-XL.jpg

Keep it Classy San Diego.

Pics make my tip tingle and moist.

Really tho. Looks like a cool setup

:rofl:rofl:rofl

Thanks dude