Do me a favor and vote for me, in this contest.
Yes its poetry, i think its rather good.
Please vote so i can get cool things. Thanks!
nah
might as well just post a shirtless picture of yourself, this may be a rough one…
edit: read it, its meh. I also hate poems that are emotional and OMG I LOVE YOU SOO MUCH
haha, i wrote it when i was in a dark place, I was almost a year ago. lots has changed since then.
I do not look good shirtless. Not one bit.
done
EDIT_ With a ten. I’ll do it again later.
Eh, it bored me, but i still gave it a 10 
i picture you writing this as a text message and the girl writing back “please stop. you are making me uncomfortable,” while most likely dropping dome to someone else
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i picture you writing this as a text message and the girl writing back “please stop. you are making me uncomfortable,” while most likely dropping dome to someone else
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and I spit ginger ale all over my computer…
I said i thought it was rather good, having no education or prior writing experience in the style.
So Im ok with whatever.
i didnt bother reading it i didnt care … but i gave u a 10 just casue its 3:45am
lost my interest after about 2 lines. kinda cliché in my opinion. regardless, i gave you a 10.