keep yo brim flat nigga! (scrapped old song. new riff up. thoughts?)

yes i am going to record it.
yes i am serious.
yes, bing is in my “group”
yes, we are from oakland

our first hit: keep yo brim flat

work in progress:
(intro)
keep yo brim flat
keep yo brim flat
keep yo brim flat, mother fucker
keep yo brim flat

(verse 1)
poppin up in the sto’, i know that new era’s got em
i roll straight to the back, i says you got 'em? i want 'em
because i pulled up real big, caprice with top chopped
they be seein my rims, twenty fo’s lookin so hot
always got what i need, got a whole rack in the back
oakland raiders, gimme two an i want four whites and black
say how you pay for this shit? i say don’t worry 'bout that
make em all triple XL and keep the brim on em flat

(chorus)
keep yo brim flat, nigga
wear it front back, nigga
ain’t no need, to wear that shit to the side, nigga
keep yo flat brim, nigga
keep yo black skin, nigga
wear yo hat straight but always leave the pistol cocked, nigga

(verse 2)
see me, need me, find me, flow
i keep bitches on they toes
when i holla then they blow
see me, need me, find me, flowwwwwww

i got the new era cap, ridin on lebrun back
so straight an so flat, you put a level on that
cuz you know i keep it clean with them white shirts and nikes
cause in the bay niggas even got they rims on they bikes

i got my shoes floppy, i keep the bottles poppin
little mommy keep i’ twerkin, cause i ain’t stoppin
got you naked wet, i got you comin yet
even when my dick up in yo ass you know i rock my hat

(repeat chorus)

Ze awesomeness.

omg.

lol

see me, need me, find me, flow
i keep bitches on they toes
when i holla then they blow
see me, need me, find me, flowwwwwww

awesome lols

HAHAHAHAHA, that is good

i thought you were adding more references about your skin color, as being black.

and i am soo gonna be a background dancer.

holla

ok i am writing this right now… must include brim flap appuuurently.

Ha Ha - Who got the Juice Now?

I keeps my brim flat, Yo watch me get loose now

With my ill booties courtesy’a Chip Foose Now

I’m cummin fo your hoochy straight up in the caboose now

Most time i rhyme about things less gangsta

But newmy set the stage and so i follow the pranksta

Roll you fo ya Scrilla take it right to my banksta

Getcha muts off my nuts i cant deal with ya skanksta

Brim so flizzy-flat

pet it like’a kitty-kat

hold my own you cant P3WN where i’m izzy-at

script gets flipt when my mic gets ript

you could catch me VIP where the 'stal gets sipt

you could catch me 50 over when the thottle gets blipt

you could catch on top when the scales get tipt

cause im turbocharged i spool up and…ssssssssss–tssshh

20 psi intercooled up ssssssss-tssssshh

PFC got me tuned up sssssssssss-tsssssssssh

395 to the wheels WHAT sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss- fa-ta-ta-ta ( <<< sequential BOV )

lol. <3 bing

You have to add “keep the sticka on the cap” somewhere in there.

That is hilarious…I can’t wait to hear it once it’s recorded.

lol, actually, i was just working on verse 3. it contains:

i rock the crisp brim, black skin, nigga top that
tags on, always leave the price on my hat

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA this is friggen funny. whose gonna beatbox?

cause it has to be the worlds worst beat boxing…

and whats your signature hype sound gonna be?(I.E. your thread with the sweetness at 3:35)

lol… i know, i needs somethin real catchy…

I need to hear a beat, so I can contribute.

What is your rapper name going to be? You must make about 10 references to it during the song.

hmmm… good point.

newmannie fresh?

New Grill Newman

wait for when one of your roomates is drunk and puking, and tell them to try and yell while they are puking…record the sounds…then pick one thats purely awesomely hilarious and attempt to mimic it and coin it your sound

LOL

I am going to need you to take a physical for a life insurance policy I am buying on you.
(Crackers can’t use the n word.)

oooh, good idea. too bad no one at my apartment drinks. :snky:

got you naked wet, i got you comin yet
even when my dick up in yo ass you know i rock my hat

I really doesn’t get any better than this.