applictaion for a new job at my base i really want
filling in box that says Describe your duties and accomplishments:
…both the editors are off sick today i just need someone elses eyes to look at it. i can added good words but can never get stuuf to flow nice
THIS IS ON TOPIC PLEASE NO FLAMES HONEST EDITS ONLY
heres what i got so far
Producing eye-catching designs that effectively carry key messages for the public affairs office as well as other squadrons in and around the installation. Have been an integral part in the layout,design,editing and production of the base monthly newspaper and various promotional items for the Air Force events. Provided continuity and reliability necessary during Operation Iraqi Freedom as I filled and provided expert support to the public affairs office during a critical personnel shortage in a time of crisis allowing the wing to meet its public affairs mission to maximum effectiveness. Have helped photograph and provided media escorts for numerous Presidential and distinguished VIP Visits.
Produced eye-catching designs that effectively carried key messages for the public affairs office, as well as other squadrons in the installation. Worked as an essential part in the layout, design, editing and production of the base’s monthly newspaper, and was involved in the promotion of various events for the Air Force Base. Organized the use of photography and media escorts for the numerous Presidential and distinguished VIP Visits.
During Operation Iraqi freedom, provided necessary continuity (you could use the word stability too) and reliability to the public affairs office due to a critical and personnel shortage in that time of crisis, therefore allowing the wing to meet its public affairs mission to the maximum effectiveness.
I changed a few things. i’m sure you can work with this much easier now. I hope that its ok? Good Luck!!!