still in the works...tell me what you think.

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Song im writing. Still in the works but wachya think?

Vengance

All your life you’ve taken shit
They’ve stoke the fire, now it’s been lit
So kill’em all and watch’em burn
They’ve fucked with you, now it’s their turn

Eye for and eye, the only way
It doesn’t matter what they say
Let’em scream and watch’em cry
They fucked with you and so must die

Relentless is their ridicule
It matters not, just adds more fuel
The only word you now live by
Vengance is now your battle cry

Your face, the one they’ll learn to dread
You wont be done until they’ve bled
Blood for Blood, run red and strong
The time is now, they dont have long

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:gay2:

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*vengeance

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It needs alot of work.

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lol…well thanx for the imput…took me a whole 10 min to write it durring commercials waching south park last night.

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I can dig it :tup:

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please hamma…dont hurt em…

nah…I guess if thats your type of music than more power to ya

-Cheater-

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Really… reallly… horrible

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Awesome start :tup:

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wow thats bad.

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:shrug:

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Someone needs a hug.

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A reach-around might be a little more suitable…

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is this emo?

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im tryin to picture josh screaming this itno his hand/mic. hahahah pwn

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not feelin it

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lol…im the drummer not the singer.

ok think Lamb of God when you read it…might make more sence.

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ahahahhaa

kill die die burn bitch. i can write to sweet

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you need longer lyrics… it is going to sound like an awful poem if you try to make a song out of it.

“They’ve stoke the fire, now it’s been lit” - stoked the fire… and also when yo stoke a fire it is already lit… stoking will just introduce more air to the fire, making it hotter

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we all know it took you 5 years.