Dave's Cash for Bmw shoot

So story is Dave will soon be selling his BMW and needed some pics, Nolan and i met up at Daves shop and took the car out for a shoot. It was raining all day and just a shitty day to take pics but Nolan and i made the best of it. Here is my set and im sure nolan will upload his later on.

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this is my first time shooting a car ( besides messing around with dan and jim ) and deff editing so please be gentle

comments and questions welcome

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added one more

I like 1,3,4 and 9

corp woodz?

Would you like an honest, constructive critique of the photos or the standard “Looks good” comment?

Thanks Ned

Dave what do you mean? i didnt put anything new into the picture if thats what your asking…

Jim sure, why not… just try not to kill my whole shoot tho lol

lol, I won’t do that.

“looks good”

FUUU steve

:rofl

The grays are nice, the shadows of the car could be brighter in relation to how bright the background is. #4 the wheel is turned the wrong way. #5 and #6 the wheel is cut off. Not bad though, the kit lens is a great lens - very sharp.

Looks good. Decent work for a “first time.”

Maybe it’s just me, but the black wheels seem to make the car hard to capture, especially in the shade, like in pic 3. The wheels just get lost. Not trying to knock the car or whatever, just pointing that out.

Yeah # 4 was a little weird since the wheel was facing the other way but Nolan was shooting the car from the front and i didnt really want to wait or turn the wheel in case he needed more shots of it in that direction since it seems he had more of an eye and vision.

5 and 6 you are right the wheels are cut off but i was really looking to highlight the front nose and quarter panel.

yeah the wheels do get lost a bit since there is so many dark colors there but i actually think # 3 came out pretty good.

thanks for the comments, keep them coming!

#1 is still my favorite. Def some good shots for your first “photo shoot”. my only comments are pretty much what Jim said haha. Look forward to shooting with you again! In better weather ofcourse…

thanks man yeah # 1 is my fav too, yeah we will deff have to get together and shoot again… maybe snow this time

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since you wanted me to give you some feedback ill do a short critique for you … if this was a shoot to try to sell the car it sucked lol but for creative purposes it was good for your first time with your own equip :slight_smile:

  1. deff wont help you sell a car … maybe a turn signal

  2. is prob your best shot … good exposure good job keeping the car level and framing it nicely

  3. tough to get this shot right without multiple exposures … cant see the wheels but the car is as close to perfectly proportioned as you could get it and i love that

  4. dont like much about this shot … sorry … never shoot the tire tread i dont care wtf your doing … oh unless your selling tires :slight_smile:

  5. 1 step to the right and dont cut off the wheel and this one would work … you should have tried to use the tree and white line to try to frame it

  6. almost didnt cut off the tire this time …

  7. finally something to use to sell the car :slight_smile:

  8. not working for me

  9. back up a few inches so as not to cut off the button and shifter boot

  10. could work with multiple exposures but i cant see much …

next time POST BIGGGER PICKTARZ! not bad for a beginner tho … my starting pix were much worse … but then again I didnt someone like myself to walk around with all summer :slight_smile:

lol thanks for the comments dan ill kepp those in mind next time i shoot.

Take it u got the new camera?

Did that interior come with a box of Uncle Ben’s??

Adaptive headlamp error FTL.

I see what you did there :ninja