I just made this real quick for… well it is obvious. What could be changed, what is good, what is bad. I am not a graphic designer so be nice 
You can take the .psd here
TIA
Mike
i think it is fine exept that the ball looks weird…
doesnt look bad IMO… but if I were you, I’d flatten the colors (is that even the correct term?) on the sticks and the ball… so to make them less “detailed”
I needed to put something in there. If you picture it empty in that gap, it looks worse… Any suggestions of what to do with it?
A front view of a lacrosse helmet? or maybe a buffalo profile like on the old school bills helmets.
I had a helmet in there, but it was a side view… maybe a front view would be that change it needed. I just deleted it all together without giving it a chance.
I would use a buffalo, but i dont want to bump into any copyright issues or anything, this is getting disbursed across buffalo
the ball doesn’t look too bad in there, it is just too… clear or something…
I love it with the helmet facing forward!
Looks much cleaner, and more aggressive
It needs some sort of blood drippage… Other than that, I like!!
Is that what a lacrosse helmet looks like now? I feel old now. Looks great BTW
i would mayb look for like a Cascade C1 helmet…that one makes it look like a hockey goalie’s hemet…and i agree, if thats what they look like now i feel old lol
thats it right there. that logo is a keeper. there is alot of detail in the sticks and the helmet, but it will look fine once my shitty printer dumbs it down a bit.
and i think the problem with the ball was it was lit in a different light then the sticks, so it looked out of place.
very nice work mike
my VERY rough idea… for you
FTW!!! lol now that logo needs “blood drippage”
I like that too, maybe superimpose a skull over that or something. No I am not obsessed with death… Freaks.
it loosk poorly made, like you used MSpaint
b&w all over
the red just says, i cry to try too hard
Put the B where the ball was then put the L where the B was, and use a better font.
LOL…I basicly did It took me like 5 min. to put that together. I know it is rough, but i dont have time to be uber fancy and make it neat and pretty so that it can be mutilated by a bad printer lol
in that case; use impact in black or blue or somethign (not red)